Dropped at chapter 6, an honest review. A good idea with a horrible execution, as most fics are. The MC has a “template” of one of the smartest characters ever made and he constantly makes extremely dumb decisions to the point where now he is a dog of the mafia. Author tried to make him look tough as he left but instead ended up making him look even more childish. Not worth a read at this point.

Story is interesting till MC whose possess Rick Sanchez and Megumi Fushiguro Templates joins a gang without any reason, forced plot a MC character dumb as much as possible was what I thought but it reached to a new level that it can be called an irreversible idiot. Too much potantial yet absolute waste if author really wants reader to enjoy it, it's better to rewrite or drop. This review is a constructive criticism not an attempt to make story seem bad everything I written in this comment is truth of matter

the story is good and all but you need to reread your work cause some of the sentences don't even make sense are even finish what there about

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