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Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv123mthOfensywny_Cioban

A very good read so far(im around c 80). A good idea for the story, don t remember any translation or typing errors, there are not any females so far wich is good, the biggest plus is that main character is not made stupid and forcfully unaware of his impact. Strongly recommend.

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I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

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SkyRexx
SkyRexxLv14SkyRexx

I’ve read upto much further in the original book so far there have been no true romance between mc and a female, only between disciples and some side characters at most

system_evolver:Thank you 🫡 we should be good as long as there aren't tons of female disciples (who are obsessed over the MC) or the MC/disciples start making harems.
Mikey_3214
Mikey_3214Lv4Mikey_3214

Question does he cultivate himself ? Or only Xu yan? Because he feels stronger when xu Yan gets stronger

Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv12Ofensywny_Cioban

Later on when his disciple lerns a technique/ enter another stage of cultivation he gets what his disciple got but a little better(for example disciple enters X stage and he gets full mastery over X stage )

Mikey_3214:Question does he cultivate himself ? Or only Xu yan? Because he feels stronger when xu Yan gets stronger
system_evolver
system_evolverLv14system_evolver

This wouldn't happen to be a harem cultivation novel would it... I don't tend to like those so I always have to ask.

Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv12Ofensywny_Cioban

So far its safe my friend

system_evolver:This wouldn't happen to be a harem cultivation novel would it... I don't tend to like those so I always have to ask.
system_evolver
system_evolverLv14system_evolver

Thank you comrade😁 Unlimited Cultivation for your future.

Ofensywny_Cioban:So far its safe my friend
Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv12Ofensywny_Cioban

WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! First signs of a romace detected at c 178 between side character and a FEMALE. Will be observing if thoese signs develop into a romace or not.

system_evolver:Thank you comrade😁 Unlimited Cultivation for your future.
system_evolver
system_evolverLv14system_evolver

Thank you 🫡 we should be good as long as there aren't tons of female disciples (who are obsessed over the MC) or the MC/disciples start making harems.

Ofensywny_Cioban:WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! First signs of a romace detected at c 178 between side character and a FEMALE. Will be observing if thoese signs develop into a romace or not.
FakeCultivator001
FakeCultivator001Lv2FakeCultivator001

I was also making the same thing but iI don't how my work leaks 😔 but the concept was dfifferent from mine .my work is base on murim

FallenReaper
FallenReaperLv15FallenReaper

???? There are tons of grammatical and names errors in every other chapter. Heck, the names of people, places, and cultivation related objects keep changing as well.

Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv12Ofensywny_Cioban

there are 2 options: 1 I mastered the dao of subconcious autocorrection 2 I wrote that at the beggining and there were no mistakes there 3 Im dumb and this is not my 1st language:)

FallenReaper:???? There are tons of grammatical and names errors in every other chapter. Heck, the names of people, places, and cultivation related objects keep changing as well.
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mmuserver
mmuserverLv13mmuserver

hi is this really good. .. .the info seem interested. thanks for the comments i will do to test. .. . hopefully will be satisfied. .. hehehe

Ofensywny_Cioban
Ofensywny_CiobanLv12Ofensywny_Cioban

i got up to chapter 257. its still good but i got bored. Maybe i will return to it in the future.

SkyRexx
SkyRexxLv14SkyRexx

Original book chapter 400 and something roughly

SkyRexx:I’ve read upto much further in the original book so far there have been no true romance between mc and a female, only between disciples and some side characters at most