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2024-08-13 09:23

It's okay to MTL and some MTL's are very good. But for this novel, it is what I would call unedited MTL where no one put in any effort at all. Just the start of the first eight chapters, I noticed the cultivation the MC mainly used underwent seven name changes. There was even a chapter that referred the male mc as "her" for the entire chapter. And instead of using Reverend Langi or Reverend Tianshan, they use True Man Langi. As if they are the only true men while the rest are fake men. As for the story line itself, it is rather bland transmigration with nothing special to speak about. What stood out to me the most is the author wrote the mc as someone that tries very hard to stay under the radar so that he doesn't get killed off early like all the other novels he had read and games he had played. Yet mc contradicts himself and kills someone with a punch and is then on a rival family's kill list. The author could at least write it was an accidental kill or something to patch up the contradiction, but the author doesn't. Therefore, it leaves a sour taste in my mouth as I keep reading to see how else the mc will contradict himself. This is a novel for someone bored with nothing else to read, but I wouldn't recommend it mainly due to the poor unedited pile of garbage.

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