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Review Detail of Polik098 in I'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!

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Polik098
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Story is good so far, world and system is fairly interesting, went premium at chapter 17 which is bad. Some things can be inconsistent which is annoying, I suspect the Author might be mostly making it up as they write without much planning. - Like in chapter 1 they imply that monsters are fairly common outside the city. - Then a few chapters later in chapter 5 we're told that most of the monsters have been killed off over the years except for some in the old forests in the mountains. - Then later but still in chapter 5 it's also too dangerous for normal people to go outside the city at all because of all the monsters outside. - Then in chapter 7, there are once again almost no monsters outside the city and you can only find them far away from the city in the old forests. It's a small thing, but to have so much conflicting information so early into a novel isn't a good sign to me for the long term.

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I'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!

Yiqian Qingdai

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Deeznuts69_
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there were a lot of monsters before they were removed from around cities, but it is still dangerous since the portals can appear the wilderness