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TribeOfOneLv67mth
2024-08-04 22:12

Overall, it's pretty mid. The start of the novel is a lot of fun because of the weird powers of the MC . But as the story progresses, you realize that everything is very shallow. The author is very racist towards other societies and civilisations, which presents itself in extremely xenophobic views. The worldbuilding is pretty meh, not very detailed, often with a bunch of exposition that has more plot holes than a piece of swiss cheese. There are a bunch of female characters that all form the MC's harem, but there's no actual romance and they're all just treated as idiots that happen to fall in love with the MC. Even then, they're all quickly forgotten one after another. While the MC's initial powers are pretty funny, the later powers are just incredibly boring and useless. The only reason they're relevant at all is because the plot armour of the story ensures the MC is always in the only place in the world where his powers actually have an effect. Near the end of the story, it just shifts into a single giant war that's basically just a meat grinder, with one character after another dying senselessly, and this is presented as some amazing victory. And finally, the story just ends halfway through a battle. The author just gives up and ends the story. You won't get to read any ending for the story, it's just a waste of time.

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GeneralDeFartos_LLv4

It's an average read. A story about a guy in a world where he could awaken abilities and has a status board. He's a priest but his abilities are weird and not priesty. It has an engaging storyline with good abilities and characters. I didn't get bored. However, it falls heavily when it comes to character interactions and the whole world view and mentality presented... -------- Character interactions: - Girls somehow fall for MC after their first meeting when there's no reason or proper interaction between them. - Side characters are the brain dead type that always gossip and praise MC or put him down, the same usual move Chinese novels use to show us how MC is awesome or how he face slaps them later. - There's nothing deep, relationships are superficial and interactions are even more dry. --------------- World view & Mentality: A whole bunch of Propaganda. It has the usual Chinese propaganda but it's set on high intensity. - People are praised for protecting the country and ignoring family. - Sacrificing for the country is a great merit. - Foreigners are bad guys and can't intrude on the benefits of China. - Forces that surrender must be integrated into China, and that integration is by severity their bloodline and treating them like livestock and gifting them to others. - The usual strong headed MC that always puts his country first. - Somehow during a battle, the souls of millions of soldiers help MC, and then he's sentimental and goes on about how china is great and every thing is for china and wants to pay back to his predecessors by fighting for China.

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