well the story is great but there are some places that needs improvement i.e. inaccurate translations, grammar and spelling mistakes and sometimes there even errors in the story line. Suggestion:The story needs to be proof read at least 2times by two different people that way there won't be such errors.

Ok heads up chapters 115-119 are ads for the authors other books and they are locked chapters (but very cheap 2-4 coins per chapter). Otherwise, i was loving the book until the other book prompts appeared and the next chapters increased in coin cost (15-20 per chapter). However it is a good book with good characters and plot line.

Advice before picking this book. Some chapters are authors' notes, and a few chapters are being cut/missing. The incomplete chapters are very annoying right when the climax of the story, then u feel all that build-up ruined. This happened 4 times ,it needs to be fix!

The book have a good start. I hope it goes well until the end.

interesting premise and promising start.

I like this novel, but unfortunately it looks like translator don't have acces to full original story, because it seems like missing 4/5th of a chapters 151, 168, 204, 299, 300 and many more smaller fragments of action in other chapters that probably are very interesting (fighting, assassination, etc). Or maybe it's just strange time skips in original. Chapters 116 to 119 are ads, so don't waste your pass or coins on it.

Completely loving this book so far and am now waiting for the author to post the next chapters after catching up.