Item: Close body King of Soldiers
Rating: 2.4
Author: Winzentwinni

WinzentwinniLv1510mth

2024-02-14 18:45

I read the first 10 free chapters. Generally I am very interested in the topic of soldiers coming back home and books that involve guns, war fighting but no major fantasy or sci-fi so I had my hopes up for this novel. Sadly so far all people are very haughty and their actions are full of stereotypical nonsense. Women are reduced to their looks and the ML is a pervert. On top of that the MC encounters one unlucky event after the other. The writing doesn't have any big grammatical errors but there are a few holes in the story. The writing feels inconsistent. The plot is predictable and nothing new really. The world background should be based on real life. There isn't much to say so far. Same goes for the updating stability, I can't comment on. If the further chapters were free I would continue to read this leisurely for today until I'm sick of it and drop it. The pay wall starts unreasonably early in this novel (chapter 11) without any truly interesting plot points to keep you fixed on reading. I don't think it's worth my coins so I dropped it. You should try it for yourself to build your own opinion.

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