Review Detail of books_n_coffee in The Villain's Lament

This is one of the most frustrating stories I have ever read. The idea is magnificent and so far (chapter 30) the mystery is unravelling nicely.But... English is obviously not the writer's first language so much praise is due for the ability to express such a complicated plot at all. However writing in the first person for different characters (even with the addition of a name at the beginning of a chapter is not ideal) causes confusion - even to the writer, it seems.There is repetition of descriptions of characters which honestly seems like a ploy to reach the required number of words in a chapter, as well as a "last chapter we read" paragraph at the beginning of a new one, which to be honest is pretty unnecessary.The plot itself is thrilling and confusionary- when the writing echoes it it can be too much. This book would definitely benefit from an editor or proof reader.fingers crossed