Review Detail of fumma in Harry Potter : twin of the boy who survived

Overall, it's just plain wrong. I want to say a child wrote it. The writing is all over the place. There are so many spelling errors that it hurts to understand what was written. The story is one-dimensional. There is no character building. No background information. Only read if you can't find anything else to read. The one good thing is the chapter releases. At least for now, it averages 1 per day. Who knows how long that will last?