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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv148mth
2024-05-19 23:06

The story is great, but it has a flaw that will make readers either love it or hate it, the story essentially becomes corn later on. about 40-50% is lemon scenes. This is greatly saddening since the story in itself is great.

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Issac_Bonilla
Issac_BonillaLv2

There's also a lot of that in the original so meh

Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv14

you're right but the difference is that in canon, there's like 1 minute scene every other episode. while here, every chapter has between 40-60 % corn. there's barely any plot

Issac_Bonilla:There's also a lot of that in the original so meh
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