This is an excellent book. The story unfolds before your eyes like a chocolate melting in a pot. Kudos Author, you've made a masterpiece!

Wow! I must commend this book... It's tough and the synopsis is catchy. Keep up the good work .

I keep loving this story more n more and just hope Jiho will survive and stop the bloodshed... And the way this cycle keep repeating itself makes me chill Oh my see goosebumps huh Ride on dear author

It's interesting how you can write a book so vividly and the phase of the story is very smooth unlike the ones I'm writing... well to those reading this review if you like eastern fantasy you might find this interesting

ah, i love this one. i am really interested in novels with historical background. silla is what i recall before joseon, right? the narration and the ambience feels so real, and the fight scene with no onomatopeia. not all writers can do that. this is great story!

I don't know what to write, but this story is so good!!! I really enjoyed it kekekeke

great book author, only read through the first two chapters and now I can't stop

This reader has completed at least five chapters upon writing this review. Where do we start, oh alright. Firstly, I would love to commend you on making a Korean novel that’s based on royal status and the imbalance between social classes. I appreciate the dynamics between the two brothers so far after reading the first five chapters. Now, on to the review proper. I really want to enjoy your story, but there are way too many grammatical errors, especially in the synopsis. Also, I was expecting something around post-reincarnation because the synopsis already gave way too much information about what the story is about. Two princes who were exiled then killed, then reincarnated after a hundred years. To be honest I was confused about the time period of the first chapter, because we were taken to a fast-paced scene of a chase going on between the princes and the guards. What I also noticed is that you inserted character descriptions in the middle of the scene that I almost forgot we were in the heat of a chase. So far, your premise has potential and is very interesting, I just think you need to execute it better. TLDR for the things you need to change: - Remove the character descriptions in between a fast-paced action scene where the princes are being chased after by guards. This ruins the reading experience. - Please fix your dialogues. The guards saying “how dare you” sounds a little unrealistic, maybe try something in between a professional and commanding tone, like “Halt!” - Change your dialogue format. It’s inconsistent in terms of style. This is a novel, not a script. Replace “Jiho: ___” with “______”, Jiho said. - Tweak your synopsis a bit. Don’t give too much information away unless it’s a timeskip. I guess I can excuse saying the two brothers died because they get reincarnated, but don’t narrate more details like “who killed who.” It spoils the readers. So far, here is my rating for your book: Writing Quality: 4* Updating Stability: 5* Character Design: 4* Story Development: 4* World Background: 4* So far, your world is very interesting and has potential to be in K-Dramas. I can visualize everything clearly. Your novel isn’t bad, it just needs improvement like everyone of us. So this is it. I think I’ll end my review with best wishes on your writing journey!

Wonderful plot author, keep updating. cheering you on!

I was not a fan of the present point of view being based on the past tense but this story proved me wrong. It was so vivid, that it got my imaginative, I am able to see what I read vividly.Beautiful, keep it up.I recommend it as it is a must read