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Kubasino13
Kubasino13Lv141yr
2024-04-15 03:22

So I’m few chapters in and really like the concept of the story haven’t seen anything similarl so far but I have a problem with the writing the use of AI is just so eye catching and Len me just say that I don’t have a problem with using AI at all but you have to rewrite it like human the text is just so unnatural it’s difficult to read but otherwise keep up the good work excited how it will develop in the future

House Of The Dragons (HOTD) : Orphan SI

KK9494
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26 Chs

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Thanks for the review, I plan to re write the chapters, at least give them the human touch. I hope you can visit it again. If you want, you can check my other fanfic Pokemon : Trainer SI, I had writtern 90 chapters for it and put them on schedule release.

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Word count chapter means the story will be dropped. It looks like it already has been. Don't waste your time.

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This is one of the best starting for Asoiaf fanfics I’ve seen in a while. The Mc is unique in his own way that unlike other MCs, he is in no hurry and is going in steady pace. I’ve seen many stories ruined by impatient mcs. Keep up the good work author.

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OverlordBGs
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It’s a really interesting novel story. The MC and AI are one of the strong points in the story, I can’t wait to see how they are going to develop in the future. Excited to see how the MC is going to play in the Game of Thrones while the Targaryens are at there strongest. Just give it a try and you are going to enjoy it.

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Hey guys hope you like, comment and stone the fic, Don't forget to leave a review. MC image-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

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EnmanuelBM
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Es un ff con mucho potencial eso no lo logran todos los autores. Espero que siga y no lo deje a la mitad 💯💯💯

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T4K4DA
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Ótima história em todos os aspectos,ótima leitura e umas das melhores fanfic de HOTD/GOT dos últimos tempos,esta de muito parabéns.[img=recommend]

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Ikaro_Rodrigues
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Simplesmente espetacular, a riqueza de detalhes e os cuidados com a expansão do mundo é brilhante. Está de parabéns. 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾

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this good novel fun to read please keep up the good work ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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anubis1650
anubis1650Lv5

I have to say I really like this story it's a fresh take on the Song of Ice and Fire series instead of just following Canon or the characters of Cannon around it more travels in the world and makes its own story while I have no doubt it will start running into a lot more Canon characters and events I have to say it's pretty original for a fanfic. I have no idea why Gratiz gave such a Negative review. I'm guessing either he's a fan of more action-packed and combat(fight scenes every ch) than World/kingdom building and storytelling or he likes characters who walk around in God mode(super op) just squashing everything is my only conclusion and if that's the case I can understand why he gave that review.

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EnmanuelBM
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más capítulos por favor. está muy bueno .

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