It has potential. The thing that draws you in is the idea…weretiger in teen wolf. Because of that concept, people will stay as long as he keeps posting chapters including myself. The problem is that with the way he currently writes, it will never be one of the greats. The dialogue is fine, a little cringe at moments but acceptable, but you’re never put into the minds of people. You can never see reactions. It’s just A is speaking and then B will speak. There’s no deeper. This should be an easy fix if he reads actual really good stories because he can be piggyback off those. I want this novel to be great and I don’t mind waiting for him to experiment with his writing for a bit to make it better but but he is going to have to want to improve
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