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Review Detail of Ryughaa in I Am Uchiha With A Son System

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Feel like A AI made this novel No depth No fight secenes Really short chapters Feels like a biography Barly any explanation this entire novel is just bland and the reason is everything the author adds is like oh here information take it no depth added to the story of how he got it Just a oh yea he killed his siblings for it could have had a fight secene there just isn’t anything that catch’s my eye this is just my opinion you don’t have to agree with me I was just saying what’s on my mind My advice is just to look at any novels that are in the top10 of a category be it fanfic or OG Analyses what they do for the interactions and how they introduce a character I feel like you aight with the understanding of how you need to put madara said or muttered Either way I hope you improve you have a outline already clearly I would just try improving it

I Am Uchiha With A Son System

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