The author has eloquence of 10 year old, I mean just look at the synopsis

bro, if the comments are asking if this ff is a Chinese translation, you are doing everything wrong because �.9999 of Chinese novels are hot garbage reading the synopsis already caused me brain damage ffs.

Feel like A AI made this novel No depth No fight secenes Really short chapters Feels like a biography Barly any explanation this entire novel is just bland and the reason is everything the author adds is like oh here information take it no depth added to the story of how he got it Just a oh yea he killed his siblings for it could have had a fight secene there just isn’t anything that catch’s my eye this is just my opinion you don’t have to agree with me I was just saying what’s on my mind My advice is just to look at any novels that are in the top10 of a category be it fanfic or OG Analyses what they do for the interactions and how they introduce a character I feel like you aight with the understanding of how you need to put madara said or muttered Either way I hope you improve you have a outline already clearly I would just try improving it

Hi author here, There are people who asked, is this translated version from chinese novel? Answer: its mine, not translated version. Eventhough you saw on my synopsis gundam susanoo. I just feel like it to put gundam susanoo instead of susanoo. Oh dont forget to support me on patreon

Finally an MC who makes changes in Konoha, many protagonists of other stories are only observers and do nothing, useless and lazy protagonists. Luckily in this story the MC is involved in improving Konoha and preventing people like Hiruzen and Danzo in the future.

The writing is pathetically repeating same thing again and again. It's like a story written by a low quality ai bot.I mean if you don't have any idea of what to write at least don't repeat the same thing again and again

This is even sadder that it is not a cn translation but instead written by the author himself. Seems like a typical Canon seeking mc who makes things happen in his Head Canon more than actual Canon as it is AU if it is not the og story. Also, why does he hide his mangekyo technique during the confrontation.

SECOND REVIEW: Author eventually stops using ChatGPT to write after like 20 chapters or so which boosts the quality. This causes the quality of the book to fluctuate wildly, but the author gets huge respect from me for rejecting the lazy AI writing and giving his story the effort it deserves. Looking forward to more 👍

Like a typical mtl novel, and almost no logic in it I'm not trying to bad mouth the book I can see that the author tried to put effort into it but there are to many plot holes and some things just don't make sense.

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