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huH2Lv41yr
2023-11-20 21:30

it's good and hoping for more chapter but man can u write it straight like I got dizzy while reading this the way u write it like there dancing

Transformers: Sam Witwicky with a System

Prahalad_2003
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11 Chs

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Prahalad_2003
Prahalad_2003Author

Thank you 😃. Will make sure it doesn't happen and will edit the previous chapters too.

1yr
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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

You know what you must do dear Author. Huhuhuhuhuhuhuhu

1yr

Nick_Lancaster
Nick_LancasterLv4

,........................................Has potential needs a lot of work

1yr
RavenBlackFeathers
RavenBlackFeathersLv4

This is certainly a wish fulfilment fanfic with a potentially op protagonist, but it is certainly interesting. The author has done research and even though it seems a bit fast paced, the story is engaging. It seems that the story will go deep into the Transformers lore and i like it. The only things I'd like to know is if there will be romance (if yes, who is the love interest) and the update schedule. All things considered, this is a solid fanfic and I'm excited for more.

1yr
DaoisthhrHAN
DaoisthhrHANLv14

Considering the advantage of AI and ML in the early 21st century, the pace at which the story proceeds is quite good. Especially with energon, the MC is bound to grow stronger. The writing is elaborate and simple, which is appreciated. [img=recommend][img=update] Keep up with this one!!

1yr
sean_robbins
sean_robbinsLv2

don't even bother! it was literally info dump after info dump! and none of the info was even about transformers but economy!!! he makes stuff and sells stuff that he shouldn't even have to begin with!!!

1yr
Joe_momma
Joe_mommaLv4

Plot moving faster than the speed of light.

1yr
DaoistHTShMf
DaoistHTShMfLv1

Transformers is an interesting world and since you have touched upon energon, I think you are trying a fusion of the comics and movies. The Cover page is interesting and if it is what I think it is, then Sam would truly become powerful. Your writing style is quite elaborate and it seems you have included the actual stock prices in few places which means you have done your research. And indeed, Skye is awesome. The potential of progressive AI in the early 2000s was simple unimaginable.

1yr
4GYz
4GYzLv4

It's worth reading this fanfic, It's a bit fast paced in the early chapter but we'll see in the future hoping the transformers timeline will be normal pace. So far its's good, keep up the good work author

1yr
Omni404_Sans
Omni404_SansLv13

Complete trash Mc can speak and walk at 4 months old no one finds it strange, perents are pushovers, plot moves as fast as light, no character development, ewerithing is instant and the story is boring. I dont even know how this has so many positive reviews unless author made separate acaunts and revieved his own fic

12mth
SlimeSage
SlimeSageLv14

The entire fanfic itself is good, kudos to the author. Hopefully, this won’t just become a passing by fanfic that would be dropped around chapter 20 or so like the others.

1yr
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