Review Detail of Novel_Dumre in Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort

I just finished reading the first chapter of this book and I gotta say, it's pretty interesting. It really grabs your attention right from the start. The only thing I think could use some improvement is the descriptions, especially when it comes to the world around the two main characters. And maybe a bit more action would spice things up even more. But other than that, I think this book has some serious potential.