Item: Strange Tales of a Little Mystic
Rating: 4.6
Author: Brian_Hanes_117

Brian_Hanes_117Lv111mth

2023-12-28 07:25

This story has excellent writing, consistent updates, and a nice creative story. At the moment, the names stand out for distinctness. The use of vocabulary is impressive. With that being said, I'd like to see a bit more visual description in terms of environment and the characters look like. My advice to every writer when making a story like this is to remember to have a child-like state of imagination where you can capture people's hearts and minds without getting stuck in the weeds. With that being said, I recommend this story. To the writer, I welcome you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.

Strange Tales of a Little Mystic

Mashuk_Musafir23

4.9

119 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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ToufiqUlAlamLv4

thank you very much.

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ToufiqUlAlamLv4

I already have it in my collection...I loved the writing and the story...This was when I just began posting on WN! I will keep reading your book!! Thanks.

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GEEGEELv13

This is quite intriguing. The mysteries from the beginning just made me so curious about a lot of things. The boy and the little girl's connection. I am so curious to what is happening between those two. Curious to find out more and loving the story. Keep up the good work.

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The story is excellent and will hook the reader to read more. Writing, characters and grammar are all good, so keep it up author.

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Akemi_KyoshiLv3

I was a bit confused with the switching back and forth of perspectives at first but the further I read the more I got to like the story. Not that far along yet but aside from a few things I enjoyed it. Keep it up!!

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FryingDragoonLv2

A very unique setting with remarkable world-building. I have to say that this story is too underrated(but I do believe it will be more appreciated in the near future). I'm not familiar with this genre but I was quickly entranced by the beguiling narration from start to end. [img=recommend]

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synopsis is Great btw . Great story👌👌👌🥰🥰! I love the background, the descriptive writing, as well as the entertaining and enjoyable plot. This novel really has potential.🥰🥰🥰🥰

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RaphisLv3

Okay, in terms of writing, everything is quite good. The sentences are very diverse, so it doesn't get too boring to read. The writing style is well-organized, although there are some parts that could be improved. The depiction of events, locations, and settings is well-written. However, what might make this novel less appealing is the slow pace in finding calming or WOW scenes, and perhaps you could promote your novel more. Because in terms of writing quality, it's already good. Keep writing this novel and strive to improve!

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This book is very well written not only with its writing quality but also with its story and character development. It is a hidden gem that contains a great story and a well crafted world building. Keep up the good work, Author.

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ToufiqUlAlamLv4

Hi! I am the author of this book and I am here to shamelessly shill my work. First of all, I want to write something different. I love Harry Potter and his magical adventures, and I loved The Jungle Book as well. I am a fan of Mark Twin so you can imagine how much I love adventure. You will be able to see a mix of modern mystery solving, magic, sorcery, love-hate-jealousy themes, jungle adventures, magical beasts and spirits, and so many more. Be ready to discover the lost memory of the protagonists and be shocked. There will be some military and espionage action as well. You will enter a dark world manipulated by devils that look like humans. Their evil plans will send a shiver down your spine. Betrayal, royal romance, and so many other things remain unexplored. If you, dear readers, read and support this work, it will inspire me a lot. So, please, give it a try. I would love to know how you feel about the story. Please leave a comment as well!!! Thank you!

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