Review Detail of IsekaidFred in Only Wisdom Awakened
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it's a good novel, it's great, and I loved every second of it that I read. until it came to the part when he was cripled by someone from the future, knowledge from the future, reincarnated, whatever you want to call it. In all honestly, it's my own liking that affects the score, not the novel being bad. I just personally believe that someone being reincarnated and messing that badly stuff just for the same of plot is not worth it. I'm sure it will work out eventually, but just to get to that point were it's good will just not be worth it. I would prefer to spend my time doing anything else, which I will. it's a shame though, as I was really liking the novel a lot, and the idea was really good. He also didn't even try to help aiden get his Legendary or Epic class, I don't remember the quality. All in all it's a good novel and if you like those kind of tropes, them give it a try, I'm sure you'll like it.
Only Wisdom Awakened
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well, I do still remember the novel, however that's not what I was coming to. yeah sure, it is resolver easily, however, using time as a trope for future plot is really difficult, and not something I was expecting to read in this novel. it's really hard to make a really good trope with some kind of time-travel, time-traveler, reincarnated if they are not the main character. it is always an incognito for the readers, and if not done well it can be really bad. little novels/manwhas with such tropes even get to have an ending, most are dropped (mostly manwhas tho). but yes, this novel is really good and from how the author was writing before I have no doubt that it will be a very good novel and maybe at some point, after I've grown some more and my likes and dislikes have slightly change, I might give this novel another try.
nebula:I know this is pretty late, but the problem with getting crippled is solved in like 10 chapters, and it never has any catastrophic or forced consequences, if that helps
The novel tries to be unique too much, to the point where it's the same as everything else. A lot of stuff is happening and trying new things instead of developing the already existing ones, which is what should be done while writing. don't add too many unique features, develop a few, and then start adding a few more slowly, or even don't, and just focus on what makes your novel unique. because everyone can just put a lot of unique features and just hope for the best. but it's really hard to pull it off. even some really great writers struggle with it. instead of going all in, start small, with a few things that make your novel unique, develop them, maybe add a few more to spice things up around the end of the novel. make sure it's a good enough ending that has to do with several of those unique quirks your novel has, and then start experimenting with adding a bunch of unique and crazy ideas in one same place. that way, you will also have the necessary experience of completing one novel and can make up for some shortcomings along the way.
IsekaidFred:well, I do still remember the novel, however that's not what I was coming to. yeah sure, it is resolver easily, however, using time as a trope for future plot is really difficult, and not something I was expecting to read in this novel. it's really hard to make a really good trope with some kind of time-travel, time-traveler, reincarnated if they are not the main character. it is always an incognito for the readers, and if not done well it can be really bad. little novels/manwhas with such tropes even get to have an ending, most are dropped (mostly manwhas tho). but yes, this novel is really good and from how the author was writing before I have no doubt that it will be a very good novel and maybe at some point, after I've grown some more and my likes and dislikes have slightly change, I might give this novel another try.