Review Detail of Almun_ in Only Wisdom Awakened

If you're reworking the story then consider having it not in the US. The back story of the MC trying to pay for the care of his family doesn't ring true. I'm not sure how things like this work in other countries but an individual would never be held responsible for the financial burden of medical care of a family member. No matter how sick my parents are the Hospital can't send me a bill. They would send my parents a bill. If my parents are unable to pay that bill then as a disabled person they would be eligible for aid from the federal government who would pay it. A hospital or any other medical facility can't kick you out just because you can't afford care. I left a long winded comment in chapter 8 as well. I understand that the MC needs a source of motivation to drive himself to do the dangerous work of killing monsters. A understanding of the complex US medical industry is not needed to write a story, but it's just too far fetched for me. Sill enjoying the story though. Thank you.