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2024-06-25 19:27

Fun characters all around. The main character was especially well written since it is a delicate balancing act between being very skilled but apathetic towards most things. There is great humor as well as action scenes. The story has a steady progression with information slowly being revealed as the FMC learns it. Also ends positively. Only two negatives were grammar, spelling and pronoun errors for characters occasionally (needs editing) and some contrived scenes that had to happen for the plot. Neither take away from story and don’t impact it much since things are still easy enough to follow.

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