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Author I really like your book. The story is creative, it has enough lemons while Stile having a funny story line. So Prost for that! But I also notice that you implement new ideas into the story without checking if these are consistent with the already written story. Like who the MCs and his Sisters parents are. There are a lot of holes once this gets revealed.

Netori: Reborn as the Human Aphrodisiac

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Hey man! What holes would that be for example? You could be right, but it could also be that you forgot a plot point. I'm open to discussion and can address my mistakes.