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Arcedemius
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2024-01-03 03:39

The translation is good, the plot less so. This reads as a story of an unlikable older bully who grooms a younger girl into being his exact perfect girl, whether she is conscious about it or not. The final straw for me was when another guy became interested in her randomly and he started beating him without warning, then basically said no one would believe you over me because I'm so perfect. The girl he was obsessed with before traveling back in time, who he rejected in the new timeline is so stereotypically self absorbed as to be seen as dumb enough to not be able to breathe and walk at the same time. There is no character development until the dumb one finally decides he's not coming back to her, and instead of chasing him (again) she stops because she realizes she lost him for good. Don't know what chapter I got up to. The translation is good. That's about all it has going for it.

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