Review Detail of in One Piece:The Lust System

Came with high hopes, seeing a One piece FF with almost perfect score but only found the average OP self insert + power fantasy. The characters feel bland and one-dimensional, the MC's personality is a bit all over the place and the grammar and vocabulary needs an improvement. Still, the writting quality has gone up consistently at chapter 40, so I encourage the Author to keep up the good work! Also, to the guy who's posted 20 5star reviews, pls top. It's misleading and can get the Author in trouble 😭😭😭