Writing quality is good, just author does go Gender Pronoun challenged regularly. Story Development for me is lack luster as the whole story now is all about throwing girls at the MC. His interactions with the ladies is sub-par and very basic.. No decent banter, women just fall to him instantly, and it is one right after the other starting around chapter 80-90. The title is about Jane and David, yet since beyond the first few chapters they are separated 80% of the story. The way the interact it feels more like an arranged marriage than a 3 year online relationship. Character Development: Jane is MIA most of the story not sure.. David has turned Literally into Zeus as he just wants to stick his stick in everything. Every confrontation he turns into "HULK SMASH" . World Background - Honestly University is a waste of time they should just drop it as it is pointless. It is full of Young Master mentality, but is Earth so pretty standard... I batch unlocked to 140ish so will read till then, but won't be continuing.
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LIKEAlso note the Lemon scenes at least aren't multiple chapters, but they are pretty basic IMO... Basic is a word I would use to describe how I feel about the story.
when he misses the gender pronoun, that mostly happens in mtl.
bro i don't know about anything else but online three years relation does seem like marriage even more cause there are less fights first meeting in reality may be a little awkward but after that it continues from online 💓
their relationship doesn't even feel like a normal marriage. The way they interact is.more like if their parents arranged it and they just followed through awkwardly.
