Review Detail of Khayzer in My Heroine Accomplice System (18+)
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I can delete this review later, I just wanted to ask what the point of this is, I mean I read in the comments that the MC seems to be someone known to the various girls that appear, Yor even slept with him, that wouldn't matter to me except for the fact that he did it thinking the MC is Loid and it seems like the girls will go off into their own worlds never to return (unintentional NTR I guess). So not being negative but other than the occasional +18, is there anything else?
My Heroine Accomplice System (18+)
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In the 3rd chapter, Echo said there is someone behind all of this that is happening in his world. In the draft I have, we will get more information regarding this "third party" that brought the characters here. While currently now on the SxF Arc, it is not much of a big problem, but once the MC enters the OPM Arc (which is next after this), things are getting leveled up later in terms of "wreaking havoc". Maybe I'm having a pacing problem with how slow it is, but I'll try to fix that lmaoo. Also, as for the avatar thingy, he doesn't need to use it all the time. Although in the SxF Arc he uses it, but in the later parts, he'll use it for strategical uses like concealing identity or anything like that. Since it would be better for the MC have a more interpersonal relationship with the characters rather than pretending to be one with the character he changed to.
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