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JayChan77
JayChan77Lv11yr
2023-11-23 18:05

The writing is excellent. Just please don't make it a harem and hope you let MC handle all the domestic level threats first before blasting off into space. Would like to see where it goes. Best of luck Author.

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InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

Please make it harem

Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

Bro harem destroyed most of fanfics .

InfinityAndBeyond:Please make it harem
Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestLv13

No.

InfinityAndBeyond:Please make it harem
InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

poor writing does

Sid_Nite:Bro harem destroyed most of fanfics .
Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

you have to have a bit of context of how a real harem works , most of the real harems were done by kings for hedonism or to get an heir and in those harem most females had contempt for other . there are many good authors who wrote good stories but the harem destroyed their story as they couldn't integrate it properly.

InfinityAndBeyond:poor writing does
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