Review Detail of Garland in Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
Review detail
Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.
Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
Metarln
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Deathwatch99999Lv15Deathwatch99999
Garland:Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.
GarlandLv4Garland
Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.
Khons:Dude. Look whose talking. Relook your review.
KhonsLv14Khons
Garland:Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.
The_Ram_TSLv2The_Ram_TS
Khons:While your typing revise what your are typing just to make sure there are no mistakes.