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Humbuub
HumbuubLv51yr
2024-01-30 00:30

checked mtlnation and your translation is pretty lame. Proper Nouns are usually wrong and the titles were never corrected. The story is surprisingly good and everything else checks out.

Make Don Quixote Great Again

Mr_Deadalus
4.6
124 Chs

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Mr_Deadalus
Mr_DeadalusAuthor

I'm pretty sure I corrected all tites and proper nouns that the mtl got wrong, the author calls Rayleigh 'Pluton', I changed it to 'Dark King', and so on, and I definitely made it more readable and removed any major grammar mistakes, if I missed anything that you would like me to correct, please specify and I'll try to improve on that.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

you missed a lot. anyway all's good, the narrative and dialogue still flowed better in your TL.

Mr_Deadalus:I'm pretty sure I corrected all tites and proper nouns that the mtl got wrong, the author calls Rayleigh 'Pluton', I changed it to 'Dark King', and so on, and I definitely made it more readable and removed any major grammar mistakes, if I missed anything that you would like me to correct, please specify and I'll try to improve on that.
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Mr_Deadalus
Mr_DeadalusAuthor

Self-review, I've read this fanfiction to the end and can confidently say it's one of the best One Piece storylines out there. The mtl has a lot of errors though, so I've taken it upon myself to make it more readable for everyone else :) Please consider giving powerstones if you liked my translation.

1yr

DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

The MTL is highly rated and the translation looks pretty good from what I've read so far, I have high hopes for this one. Have my stones, sir :)

1yr
Nevermoar
NevermoarLv2

Nice to see a Doflamingo insert, one of the best villains in all of anime, hope that you can do him justice. Don't drop this like most of the other translators please

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Honestly I was a worried a bit that this story will be a waste of time because of the reviews all being 5 stars and there being 10 total reviews… just seemed a bit fishy but I was wrong. This story is actually a good One Piece fanfic and definitely want to read more so bravo

1yr
Project_Traveler
Project_TravelerLv14

To you dear author......................

1yr
LGK_maore
LGK_maoreLv4

one of best written ff on one piece world ,,the characters building ,interaction,thinking even the different povs all well-done beside i like this type of villian mc not completely ruthless.. he's cunning manipulative has good grasp on his own affair ...the power system also amazing not evolving suddenly into op by few chapters it's steadily and reasonably illustrated ...really good job🔥🔥🔥🔥 ,,i hope this ff keep going not to be dropped and well done for ur hard working translator san 🙋‍♂️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Magu
MaguLv12

Reveal spoiler

1yr
meHzyk
meHzykLv4

After reading it I realized that this isn't for me, I can't like a "villain" who is a "little racist" as they say in the comments. It totally ruined my experience, I don't recommend it.

1yr
Elemise
ElemiseLv1

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WeedSmokah
WeedSmokahLv3

Good translation with a well thought out plot. Good job author and please release more chapters.

1yr
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