tbh bad story in general ,author is giving mc speed like flash, and making him lose an eye to basic titan ,mc is cringe and stupid def not something i would recommend if u like bit rationality in the novel
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🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yours
And when did Dina Fritz become a basic Titan? you don't know your Titans bro, Adios
and you definitely don't know about the powers u have to the MC bro
Kris_Tylers_1273:And when did Dina Fritz become a basic Titan? you don't know your Titans bro, Adios
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_Harsh_:and you definitely don't know about the powers u have to the MC bro
also about reading too latest chapter i read more than 15ch , which i think is enough to tell if a book has potential
Seriously?? You stated in a comment that "he is fast, maybe even faster than the flash"...Really?? Not being able to save his mother in time is ridiculous, he could have walked around the city several times before the titan even breathed even if he had a slower speed than the flash, you were the one who used the flash as an example but no, let's make him a slow retard and stupid, killing his mother for the plot... Losing an eye doesn't make sense, he's too quick to be hit, you added powers to him without knowing how to incorporate them, these are forced situations that don't make sense considering the capabilities of the MC or what his capabilities should be apparently... Your excuses are bizarre, admit that you were hasty in choosing the MC's powers because you didn't know their level and the impact it would have on the world of AoT.
Kris_Tylers_1273:🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yoursimage
faster than flash.......even the slowest flash is not that pathetique, i really liked your story man despite all the problems that kept showing up i still believed in you, but now........please just admit that you didnt think this through.
Kris_Tylers_1273:🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yoursimage
I didn't really think this through
Ireallylikereading:faster than flash.......even the slowest flash is not that pathetique, i really liked your story man despite all the problems that kept showing up i still believed in you, but now........please just admit that you didnt think this through.image
well that's nice, a person finally accepting his mistakes
Kris_Tylers_1273:I didn't really think this through
the first step of improving yourself is acknowledging your mistakes and weaknesses. just know that this isnt the end
Kris_Tylers_1273:I didn't really think this through
looks like you where not in bad mood reading this fic
i would argue that my review was alright with how many ppl liked and commented on it within few days
DukeMaster:looks like you where not in bad mood reading this fic
true
Kris_Tylers_1273:🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yoursimage
hay at list you can now property gadge the MC's power
Kris_Tylers_1273:I didn't really think this through
you have a point on that mark
_Harsh_:i would argue that my review was alright with how many ppl liked and commented on it within few days
Let this man cook
RcMartone:Seriously?? You stated in a comment that "he is fast, maybe even faster than the flash"...Really?? Not being able to save his mother in time is ridiculous, he could have walked around the city several times before the titan even breathed even if he had a slower speed than the flash, you were the one who used the flash as an example but no, let's make him a slow retard and stupid, killing his mother for the plot... Losing an eye doesn't make sense, he's too quick to be hit, you added powers to him without knowing how to incorporate them, these are forced situations that don't make sense considering the capabilities of the MC or what his capabilities should be apparently... Your excuses are bizarre, admit that you were hasty in choosing the MC's powers because you didn't know their level and the impact it would have on the world of AoT.
This is as ridiculous as a speedster dying from a gunshot, congratulations, the quality of your story has reached the level of Marvel's plot
Kris_Tylers_1273:🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yoursimage
tbh, it's incredibly hard to write flash as a character, and in the cartoons he would sometimes trip over something rock, so I don't really see any problem with the author nerfing his character in the beginning and will continue to develop as time passes by
hardest comeback would be him actually writing an aot fanfic and it surpassing endless path
Kris_Tylers_1273:🥱Before you gave this review, I feel like you didn't read to the latest chapter... most of you are just like this, You're not seeing the full potential of the book at large.Alright, He lost his eye to a basic Titan. for what reason does that warrant for a One star review, If I gave him speed, what happened there? why didn't you complain about the Lightning magic?Honestly I feel like you don't know what you're complaining about, Well there are other AoT fics, Bye and don't come back... if you have incredible problems then you might as well write yoursimage
