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WurstistLeben
WurstistLebenLv41yr
2024-02-16 20:45

Overall i like it. It's a good Story with an interesting idea, but it seems really jumpy and disconnected sometimes. Some of the flashbacks of of random background characters are boring to me instead of aiding in worldbulding because some of them will probably never be mentioned again.

The Never Ending Market.

LittleLemur
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LittleLemur
LittleLemurAuthor

appreciate the review. can you point the parts or atleast one where the story got confusing as you mentioned? I'll learn from it. thank you! if there is anything you wish to talk to me about, do tell.!

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WurstistLeben
WurstistLebenLv4

Chapter 12 made me write my review. Pretty much everything about Adam, why is it important what he did a week before the outbreak if he didnt even leave with them. If i find the time i will reread the earlier chapters

LittleLemur:appreciate the review. can you point the parts or atleast one where the story got confusing as you mentioned? I'll learn from it. thank you! if there is anything you wish to talk to me about, do tell.!
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