Was fine until the premium chapters started, first big conflict of the novel, could've been solved in 10-20 different ways (vampire saves him, he gets new powers with his system, etc...), instead when he's about to die his system enters what I like to call a "MCs are immortal as long as plot armour exists mode" and gives him a temporary powerup to kill the enemies and win the fight, in my opinion that's a solution for a lazy writter, one who doesn't bother to think about the direction of his novel and only wants to write a basic novel to get some money. (not saying it's the case, but that's usually the case for most harem writters) Anyway, I didn't like the way he solved the conflict, therefore i'm dropping the novel :P
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