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MadamaruLv21yr
2023-11-08 12:35

Other than the repeating part of the 1st chapter (which I have read), I like the writing quality! I like how you post so frequently, but don't overwhelm yourself if it proves to be a lot. Characters seem alright and nothing out of the norm. I like how you introduce us with something strange, almost alien-like which captivated everyones' attention but most of them lose interest and go back to their work. Seems pretty reasonable, but honestly I'd think the kids sitting by the window would still peak at what's going on, no? Overall, pretty good. Solid 4.0.

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