My biggest problem with this story is that all the dialog feels robotic and un human.second problem is that the mc(mc's name is sico) system is weak đ to such a degree that It makes him weaker then a normal person in gaining stats and he stated with 7 intelligence he should level up way more and gain stats way more.
Tang12
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LIKEIssue is youâre trying to make fallout realistic only the Mc and what ever main game character you have in it should be cracked also the big players in wasteland like end game he should be able to 1v1 a death claw
Tang12:It's true but that's not how a realistic world works, there is an increase but it is not that fast and Sico is preoccupied with other things not just exercising (an example), I like it to be a mix of realistic and a system genre, where a system is not omnipotent and still under the law of realism even though a system itself I not a realistic thing in the first place, but I understand your pint of view and thank you for giving me your opinion! I like to interact with my readers like this[img=recommend]
it doesn't have to be A OP system but stats like strength and Agility should be easier than others because if you just exercise a lot you should be able to increase those easier
Tang12:As for the system, I'm sorry that you feel it's too weak, but I don't want to rely on the system too much just like my other novel RITK, I hope you continue reading Fallout 4 rebirth in Vault 81 I can't promise that it will be great as I know each people have different expectations
Tang12:As for the system, I'm sorry that you feel it's too weak, but I don't want to rely on the system too much just like my other novel RITK, I hope you continue reading Fallout 4 rebirth in Vault 81 I can't promise that it will be great as I know each people have different expectations
It's true but that's not how a realistic world works, there is an increase but it is not that fast and Sico is preoccupied with other things not just exercising (an example), I like it to be a mix of realistic and a system genre, where a system is not omnipotent and still under the law of realism even though a system itself I not a realistic thing in the first place, but I understand your pint of view and thank you for giving me your opinion! I like to interact with my readers like this[img=recommend]
Bridallist7645:it doesn't have to be A OP system but stats like strength and Agility should be easier than others because if you just exercise a lot you should be able to increase those easier
Nope, it's completely fine I understand how you feel, thank you for taking the time to give a constructive and honest review!
Bridallist7645:I'm not trying to be rude it just how I feel
Tang12:It's true but that's not how a realistic world works, there is an increase but it is not that fast and Sico is preoccupied with other things not just exercising (an example), I like it to be a mix of realistic and a system genre, where a system is not omnipotent and still under the law of realism even though a system itself I not a realistic thing in the first place, but I understand your pint of view and thank you for giving me your opinion! I like to interact with my readers like this[img=recommend]
Tang12:Nope, it's completely fine I understand how you feel, thank you for taking the time to give a constructive and honest review!
Bridallist7645:you're welcome but what about bobble heads are those going to help mc to
Tang12:Yes it will have some value not as big as in the game but it will definitely help
Bridallist7645:what about creation club items are you going to use those and what about mods
I left it at chapter 21 because I don't tolerate the form of dialogue, as if you had never read a novel, since this type of dialogue greatly limits the way the characters express themselves.
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