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Chaos_Evil_Daoist
Chaos_Evil_DaoistAuthor1yr
2023-11-02 03:00

Almost a shameless review, but I didn't want to go too far. The book just started and I hope it will go far, but you never know. My writing quality is well... not the worst but still. I hope that readers can tell me what's wrong since even thought I'm also a reader I can't see my own book from that point of view...

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I_am_God5
I_am_God5Lv2

Please don't make the mc blindly follow Harry

1yr
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Chaos_Evil_Daoist
Chaos_Evil_DaoistAuthor

Don't worry, as I said I often look from the readers perspective and even if not for that, the mc doesn't have anything to gain other than trouble. I mean, he's going for what's the best for himself without being influenced by fame, or adoration of others.

I_am_God5:Please don't make the mc blindly follow Harry
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Sebastien_Lecours
Sebastien_LecoursLv15

i like it so far i dont know if you plan to put some R 18 but if you do please pace them dont put R 18 chaptet every 5 chapter xD 30 to 40 chapter in between is the best pace in my opinion with thatvsaid please dont drop it and continue your hard work

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gostei bastante e espero que vc continue escrevendo ansioso por um novo cap

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