A dumb and weak MC who is easily manipulated [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Mc just got attacked and contained in a cell and then he starts cooperating with them as nothing happened

I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.

MC is a cuck, shield tranquilized him and locked him up, and he just got up and helped them, like what kind of brain dead MC is this? does the author have no self respect

Dumb MC. Claims to be genius but gets easily bullied and threatened. Gets easily subdued by so called monkeys and got stripped naked . Very poor character and story development.

The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally

You are doing well, I can more or less get what you trying to convey form your writing but not all readers have the patience to understand the words. Try to flesh out the Mc's thoughts and emotions a bit. A sentence here and there. Trust me, it will work wonders. As for the progress of strength I am satisfied. The bashing is that Mc just made a Omake joke while Sheild assaulted him and made him uncounsiouss and literally tried to steal Omnitrix. So without, Ben's thoughts on matter, the scene will look he is a pushover.