Review Detail of AcheronMain in Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary
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I see, thank you for pointing those out i will endeavor to try and improve upon those things. sad to say this but unfortunately most if not all the things you've read in Volume 2 is mostly my writing with barely any AI aside from sentence structure and having it expound on the world currently around Odin. I'll try and improve with the interactions my characters have. 👍🏼
AcheronMain:also, the way u use the Ai makes it so the chapters are in narrative which makes it have time skips or makes the characters look forced when talking like with ikora,zavala, and cayde at that point they are just talking like npc and they don't feel alive also the MC feels so forced when he says something basically all the problems u have here is because of the AI
YourRaven:I would very much appreciate it, if instead of writing a review to call me out on using AI. you could instead write a comprehensive review on how I could make a better Fanfic.Thanks for the Review though 😃image
also, the way u use the Ai makes it so the chapters are in narrative which makes it have time skips or makes the characters look forced when talking like with ikora,zavala, and cayde at that point they are just talking like npc and they don't feel alive also the MC feels so forced when he says something basically all the problems u have here is because of the AI
YourRaven:I would very much appreciate it, if instead of writing a review to call me out on using AI. you could instead write a comprehensive review on how I could make a better Fanfic.Thanks for the Review though 😃image
I don't know if this is a sarcastic comment or an actual sincere recommendation. so I'll say this either way. I apologize if my comment to your review was taken as aggressive or confrontational, I sincerely Hope you a wonderful day. I appreciate your advice Thank you ☺️
AcheronMain:here's an advice use AI to fix minor stuff like grammar, not to write an entire story
YourRaven:I don't know if this is a sarcastic comment or an actual sincere recommendation. so I'll say this either way. I apologize if my comment to your review was taken as aggressive or confrontational, I sincerely Hope you a wonderful day. I appreciate your advice Thank you ☺️
hmm I see, so there not much use of an ai in the 2nd part, so yeah u need work on the interactions of the characters
YourRaven:I see, thank you for pointing those out i will endeavor to try and improve upon those things. sad to say this but unfortunately most if not all the things you've read in Volume 2 is mostly my writing with barely any AI aside from sentence structure and having it expound on the world currently around Odin. I'll try and improve with the interactions my characters have. 👍🏼