Item: Lords Online: Kingdom-building MMORPG
Rating: 5
Author: Darja_Renen

Darja_RenenLv31yr

2023-11-21 20:24

Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment and I took a liking in Aizen, I can say he is a well written character. I genuinely enjoyed the story. 10/10. In library it goes!

Lords Online: Kingdom-building MMORPG

Copycat_Writer

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Copycat_WriterAuthor

Thanks! are you a review swapper?

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Darja_RenenLv3

Yes, I’d gladly do as many reviews as needed, I already left one under both of your works. I simply track everyone who left a review under my novel, check one or two chapters and I write one for them too.

Copycat_Writer:Thanks! are you a review swapper?

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