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Overall: Great book keep going, the story was interesting to make push through despite the cons, unfortunately it seems to have gone on hiatus Okay, here the cons and some tips (more for improvement rather than anything else): - Use past tense, instead of present. - too much description, that sound robotic - this relates to the last point, but: too much philosophical description, adding some here and there is good, but not every action needs to be described like that (use it rarely and wisely) Exmp: "He held the pill..." not "he held the pill in his hand it's weight signifying his only lifeline in this harsh reality, as it acted as a strong reminder of the cruelty of the world.." This is more of a tip, but I think you should get a better cover (I am happy to help if you don't know how) Anyway, good luck and hopefully you come back soon.

u got a patreon bro ?? this is a good story hopeful u dont give up on it

This is a good novel, a hidden gem. The MC is cautious and actually thinks about the steps he makes. He isn't an arrogant fool, who will do irrational things based on his emotions. Instead he bides his time, and always ensure he makes the winning move. His system isn't too OP either. It's exactly as it presents itself, no extra sign-in nonsense, no lottery, no hidden reward. All it does is optimize techniques. Which is a decent cheat. The writing is a step above your normal original fic, and the MC seems to be a ruthless character willing to do anything for power with no remorse or scruples. One thing I would like to see more of in the novel however, is more interaction between the mc and the world/characters. For the most part mc is a hermit (which isn't bad).

I am in chapter 25 and i enjoyed the chapters. The novel so far is great and promising

although the starting chapters felt robotic and repetitive . the latest chapters are definitely better and the mc definitely feels more like a villain now and the system also isnt too op and feels good enough need more chapters

Good.

Very promising, I enjoyed every chapter and looking forward for more.

A well-crafted world, with a promising yet not invulnerable character. The cultivation system is gradual and not overpowered, and am loving to see where this story goes!