the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

you need to keep in mind that the characters you are writing about are adults with responsibilities, people like them don't get excited about things or at least they don't show them on their faces, specifically a lord paramount of north won't say "wow". the moment i read that i closed the tab immediately. just try to understand the frame of mind of the character.

Shameless author giving his work 5 stars but you all should read it and then decide what this story deserves.

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i usually prefer mc who does not serve anybody but whatever