Review Detail of KIWDANTI in JOURNEY OF GOKU IN FICTION

Greetings, Fellas :) . As a newcomer to the world of writing, I humbly present a story that has been brewing in my mind for quite some time. While I acknowledge that I may have faltered in the beginning with grammatical errors and poor word choices, I am committed to refining my craft with each passing day and rectifying any errors in previously published chapters. I implore you to provide candid feedback on each chapter, be it positive or negative, as any constructive criticism will aid in my growth as a writer. Thank you for your time and consideration.