I think I have done quite well in translating it and I shamelessly deserve to give it 5 stars as the translator
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LIKEHow do you even have the will and energy to translate it if you don't play the game?đ I admire your resilience. Your translation is better than MTL, but it also needs a lot of work. The story doesn't flow smoothly, but to be fair, most amateur works are like that too. There are a lot of words used that don't fit with the rest of the sentence. You could have used a different word. I wanted to provide suggestions, but I don't have that much time considering the number of errors. And it doesn't seem like you correct them anyway, considering the number of people who provided suggestions yet went into deaf ears. All in all, great job.
DaoistTranslator:How do you even have the will and energy to translate it if you don't play the game?đ I admire your resilience. Your translation is better than MTL, but it also needs a lot of work. The story doesn't flow smoothly, but to be fair, most amateur works are like that too. There are a lot of words used that don't fit with the rest of the sentence. You could have used a different word. I wanted to provide suggestions, but I don't have that much time considering the number of errors. And it doesn't seem like you correct them anyway, considering the number of people who provided suggestions yet went into deaf ears. All in all, great job.