Name of MC is very inconsistent as well as pronouns which keep changing from male to female. Otherwise this a very good story, interesting to the point of not being boring even after not a lot happening in the first chapters. Worth the time reading though .

Please do not delete this review, because if you do that just means that you cannot take constructive criticism and you’re not a author that I want to continue with if you do. Your story is great, where you’re going with it even better. I like the main character, I like how the main character is building his forces, and the fact your world building is getting bigger(pause) and better. My only problem is is that from chapter 20 to 175 I have been paying to read each chapter and you have done nothing but mix up the gender of the mc endlessly. At first, I thought that you would get better, but with this you have gotten a little worse so until you take a look at all the old chapters and some of the new chapters that you have and fix the miss gendering I am going to take a pause from this book. If there is no notification that you have started fixing the chapters then there’s no reason for me to continue. You are doing exceptionally well and I would love to continue reading this story, but I don’t wanna have to keep doing the extra work knowing that the MC is a boy and not a girl. Having to keep saying him when you have typed her, or having to keep saying he when you have typed she in my mind is entirely too much work and I am no longer going to continue to pay for each chapter if you can’t do that. I’ve drop plenty of books some trash, so the grammar is to unbearable, but I have yet to drop a book for mixing up the genders so much. And it’s not like no one is telling you there are plenty of comments telling you this. Again I like this book but I’ve read enough until it get fixed.

I have read this story before or at least a story with the same storyline. This is a interesting read for people that can’t find anything else to read.