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Cenauge
CenaugeLv141yr
2023-12-22 00:39

It’s a pretty bad start, and that’s what this review is based on so keep that in mind. This novel doesn’t seem to know how to breathe and take its time. It’s fine to move fast when the story is moving fast, but there isn’t enough description during the slower moments. The premise is okay: typical survivor death game stuff with a heavy Gantz influence. The intro is a bait and switch but it happens so quickly it’s like pulling the fishing line up the second you cast it out. It would have been better for the bus crash to happen after the MC had his confrontation with the woman who texted him. That way, it would seem like we were getting one story and then we get switched into another. MC basically changes into a different person the moment the death game happens, probably because we get no time to find out who he is before the bus crash so the few details we do get paint him as someone other than the typical MC that he very much turns into. In summary: this novel is in a big hurry to get somewhere that isn’t really that interesting or new.

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Immortali
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Thank you for the review. Now I know I don't want to read this one. That bait is the one thing that tempted me to read, but now that I know it's just a bait, I don't feel like it anymore.

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