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2024-02-11 04:34

Not all bad, but sometimes the MC acts in an inconsistent way that doesn't fit his background. It's kind of your stereotypical story with cringe moments. One of my big complaints is that the author has long comments after the last chapter paragraph, which adds to the cost of unlocking the chapter. The chapters lock at 14 Chapter 11. The 14 is because the author has some chapters prior to the story regarding his struggles and newborn son's health. The locked chapters are extra expensive because, after the last story paragraph, other paragraphs follow, which gives thanks to supporters and updates on his struggles. There is no break in the paragraphs to indicate the change, and it can be confusing when reading.

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