Review Detail of Draser_Spartan in [Being rewritten]

As the story is progressing it is very good. It was a little rough in the beginning, and I feel that the author could have better explained the parameters of the MC’s ability a little better to clear up initial confusion. For example, the author talks about trainin imagination, without much explanation on what that means exactly. For a character like Gremmy, the reasons for why training is even necessary needs to be better explained in the beginning. Outside of that, the book is very well written, and I look forward to future updates.