The characters seem to have distinct personalities and roles within the story. However, it might be helpful to provide more background or context about each character to help readers connect with them better. The dialogue is realistic and fits the tense situation the characters are in. It might be beneficial to break up the dialogue with more descriptive language or actions to give readers a better sense of the scene.The plot seems intriguing, with the characters dealing with the aftermath of a battle
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