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Tuf
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Sigh, such a good story with a fascinating and interesting mc but the author had to ruin it with the op nonsense! Isnt the gentle fist and having the best byagukan in the universe enough? maybe add senjutsu and even the tenseigan in the future? But NO that wasn't enough for the author; she is now mastering all the elements, learning medicine and killing anbu from the other side of the village with lightning before the academy. Hints about copying other bloodlines... etc. Its so over the top that even kaguya wouldn't be able touch her in a few years. Where is the suspense?

Naruto : Hinata Hyuga

Devils_hand

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Rishav_Saha_1096
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dude, don't even get me started. Most kids are not in a state of consciousness until they are at least three, even and especially among geniuses here in our world. If we take it as two, then that age should get to seven. Furthermore it takes time to get your chakra under control, and it will take even more time especially when starting so young. Children , even clan kids start practicing with chakra and taijutsu when they reach five, before that they go through menial stretching exercises and the like. A five year old CANNOT in any circumstance reach Jonin level, that's just not possible, leave aside kage. If you can compete with a genin at that age then you are considered a genius. And lastly, you actually made a fatal error, you become a master in something only after practicing it for at least 10 years, not 5. And even then, especially with regard to art, you never truly master it. Same for every other field, there is a reason why people devote their entire lifetime to a subject and barely manage to scratch the surface (mathematics, philosophy, physics, chemistry, botany, linguistics etc). Everything just does not happen with ugh practice. I have nothing against op mcs, but it always feels like they are never really in any trouble nor face any difficulty. If you wanna make an op character, better turn it into a gig or a comedy, or else it will be exceedingly boring. If you have seen a lot of animes, you will realise this trope. That is why you see it in marvel and dc, characters who are op, the dialogue is comedic, yet still the protag faces challenges along his way!

Devils_hand:really bro, if you practice something for 5 years let's say drawing, wouldn't that make you master in that art.
Devils_hand
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bro there is a tag named 'Overpowered' don't you see that, and in the synopsis i also clearly stated that the Mc will be powerful,and all of her achievements are reasonable, as for the suspension, well if I had mentioned it in the synopsis i would have write that which i clearly don't mention. so sorry that I can't meet your expectations 😔

Bob_Uchiha_XD
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XD

Devils_hand:bro there is a tag named 'Overpowered' don't you see that, and in the synopsis i also clearly stated that the Mc will be powerful,and all of her achievements are reasonable, as for the suspension, well if I had mentioned it in the synopsis i would have write that which i clearly don't mention. so sorry that I can't meet your expectations 😔
Jonathan_graterol
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XD

Devils_hand:bro there is a tag named 'Overpowered' don't you see that, and in the synopsis i also clearly stated that the Mc will be powerful,and all of her achievements are reasonable, as for the suspension, well if I had mentioned it in the synopsis i would have write that which i clearly don't mention. so sorry that I can't meet your expectations 😔
James_Carlson_5574
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XD

Devils_hand:bro there is a tag named 'Overpowered' don't you see that, and in the synopsis i also clearly stated that the Mc will be powerful,and all of her achievements are reasonable, as for the suspension, well if I had mentioned it in the synopsis i would have write that which i clearly don't mention. so sorry that I can't meet your expectations 😔
Rishav_Saha_1096
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but the key fact is that the achievements are "not" reasonable. I can accept her doing this when she is 13 but NOT 5!

Devils_hand:bro there is a tag named 'Overpowered' don't you see that, and in the synopsis i also clearly stated that the Mc will be powerful,and all of her achievements are reasonable, as for the suspension, well if I had mentioned it in the synopsis i would have write that which i clearly don't mention. so sorry that I can't meet your expectations 😔
Devils_hand
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really bro, if you practice something for 5 years let's say drawing, wouldn't that make you master in that art.

Rishav_Saha_1096:but the key fact is that the achievements are "not" reasonable. I can accept her doing this when she is 13 but NOT 5!
Devils_hand
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bro you are comparing things from a normal human perspective, where in Naruto there are god level characters. see when a child of God is born he is already league above a mere human. i think you haven't read the story but the main character whose already immortal and lived countless years can't be compared by normal mean, in a way I have nerfed it very much to balance things out. . as per you say practicing for 5 year didn't make you master, than look at Naruto who master the rasnshurikn in a month and many examples. i don't know why people compare realism and fiction, there is a reason why it's called fiction. .

Rishav_Saha_1096:dude, don't even get me started. Most kids are not in a state of consciousness until they are at least three, even and especially among geniuses here in our world. If we take it as two, then that age should get to seven. Furthermore it takes time to get your chakra under control, and it will take even more time especially when starting so young. Children , even clan kids start practicing with chakra and taijutsu when they reach five, before that they go through menial stretching exercises and the like. A five year old CANNOT in any circumstance reach Jonin level, that's just not possible, leave aside kage. If you can compete with a genin at that age then you are considered a genius. And lastly, you actually made a fatal error, you become a master in something only after practicing it for at least 10 years, not 5. And even then, especially with regard to art, you never truly master it. Same for every other field, there is a reason why people devote their entire lifetime to a subject and barely manage to scratch the surface (mathematics, philosophy, physics, chemistry, botany, linguistics etc). Everything just does not happen with ugh practice. I have nothing against op mcs, but it always feels like they are never really in any trouble nor face any difficulty. If you wanna make an op character, better turn it into a gig or a comedy, or else it will be exceedingly boring. If you have seen a lot of animes, you will realise this trope. That is why you see it in marvel and dc, characters who are op, the dialogue is comedic, yet still the protag faces challenges along his way!
SOMMO_ARCANO
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Rasenshuriken is just rasengan with wind chakra Also naruto have 1k year he is reincarnation of asura and he is literally jesus of naruto, also if isnt for kurama give problem with chakra control and asura he still can reach a power beyond kage (look naruto film when they go to another world and memna is naruto without asura chakra) Also Rasenshuriken ia master when isnt master even at end of shippuden he only become so strong for ignore effect

Devils_hand:bro you are comparing things from a normal human perspective, where in Naruto there are god level characters. see when a child of God is born he is already league above a mere human. i think you haven't read the story but the main character whose already immortal and lived countless years can't be compared by normal mean, in a way I have nerfed it very much to balance things out. . as per you say practicing for 5 year didn't make you master, than look at Naruto who master the rasnshurikn in a month and many examples. i don't know why people compare realism and fiction, there is a reason why it's called fiction. .