Review Detail of CouchPotatoDandy in Harry Potter: Ero World

This fanfic is definitely a five star. Just as a synopsis said, there is smut and good plot, also the grammar without many mistakes. If there's one thing I hope the author will start to do more is showing the MC status every few chapters, after all if he has an RPG system then all the fund is to see how the MC is becoming progressively stronger numerically. There are times when after the MC conquer a girl, he is supposed to get a plus 1% affinity in some affinity of his, but the author stopped showing this is the message, which is kind of a bummer...