The main character is obsessed with Hestia for no reason. I hope it will be fixed as the story continues ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Harem or Non-Harem? ???????????? ?

The Simulation system is a literal legitimate CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) story system but one with actual tangible rewards base on how well the MC does. And I gotta say that is an amazing concept that I've never seen before. I am worried about how the plot will work out as a system like this IS fascinating, but easily and quickly will/can run into "The Gamer" issue of the MC reaching a point so unbelievably powerful in such a short time that the writer HAS to railroad ways in such that the MC at least has a chance to loose/fail, and even those that are done correctly are very few in number. Or the writer just doesn't try and the story becomes nothing but wish fulfillment power fantasy that a 10-12 year old would think is the best thing since a pizza and ice cream party/birthday. Those CAN be fun once in awhile too no matter how old you get/are. The dialogue comes out a bit strange so far, with the MC literally SAYING he is a new arrival to someone and them responding by asking the MC if they are new here... And that is just one of many instances. So dialogues need re-orderings if not full rewrites. Otherwise treat it like a half CN translated story and turn part of your brain off when reading... Here is to hoping that things turn out great and looking forward to reading more, if for nothing else than because of this story's spin on a simulation system. This was written after chapter 10 (just after starting chapter 11 Rewards)

You are doing a good job and I just don't like the character too much but it's not ypur fault .It's too much Hestia this Hestia that but she is great legal Loli well there is Illiya from Fate who is cute but then again she is illegal in some stories .Also can you tell me the MtL Version? I like to loose my Iq quite a bit

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I don't know who needs it but you can go to mtlarchive.com and read upwards to over 300 chapters

everything is good, the only flaw was everything that MC got from his simulation went to hestia while he IS member of Hephaestus family, and mc might or (if not) already quit and joining hestia

Amazing read with a different take compared to others. Looking forward to read more of this.